Wind,Clouds,Rain-Weather.

Wind, Clouds, Rain - Weather!
Raedence and H.j saw lightning outside their house along time ago.Weather can be every were.

Wind can move softly and wind can move strongly.Thin clouds sometimes can mean the weather might change.The dark grey clouds mean that the rain is ready to come out of the clouds .Rainbows are made when rain and sunshine combine.





My report tells about something new, important, unusual or interesting.

My piece has a headline.

My headline gets the readers attention and tells about the main idea of the newstory.

The introduction comes next. It is short and tells who, when, what where.

The rest of my writing tells more facts.


I told about the news happening to someone else.- I have not used I


I have not wasted words.

I have underlined and corrected my spelling.

All my sentences start with a capital letter and end with a full stop.

I used the toolkit because i am being literate.

Comments

  1. Raedence, I am impressed that you can now follow a rubric to check your own writing and make sure it has everything it needs. You are publishing lots of writing to your blog. Keep it up. Your blogging skills are improving and I see you are remembering to link to the toolkit too.

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