STRIKE

By Anonymous -
A couple of week's ago some people visited us can you remember who?
You guessed STRIKE PERCUSSION.when everyone stepped in to the hall and there were drum's.One set on the stage and some in front of the stage.We all got to go to a work shop it was amazing i don't even have word's for it.This is room 10/my class.We got to have a 30 sec free drum at the start it sounded like angry elephant's.Then the man (his name is James or jimbo the flying nimbo) taught us some beat's like what's the time bro i don't no.It was so cool.They are professional drummer's The strike has been going on for ten year's.So cool right.Well if you went i hoped you had a good time.
see ya.

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  1. Whaea Georgia30 June 2017 at 19:13

    Wow Raedence, your writing is so descriptive, it has taken me back to our Strike workshop. You have even included a simile! Well done. I wonder if you could craft this piece of writing but adding in what other sights and sounds we had at the first performance.

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