My wrist

By Anonymous -
My wrist my wrist its in a twist don't cry don't cry just wave goodbye oh no so sore ignore it more ahh that's better a cast at last

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  1. Whaea Georgia17 March 2018 at 11:12

    Wow Raedence, your poem is fantastic. I wonder if you could edit it so the rhyming is on each line. I can help you with this. I also think you should record it on an ipad to add to your blog because it is definitely a performance piece!

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