Cross-country

My heart was racing as we lined up.In my head were a lot of voices in my head,some were saying "go go" when others were saying "no no".321 bang!We'r going,as people all most trip up so do i phew saved it.People were shouting,puffing "ahhh" i'm never gonna make it!Whats that smell "eww" its mud stench. Some thing just flew in to my mouth!My third lap all most done. (puffing)Hey i'
m done! (ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh)
 

Reflection:I tried my best and I did better than last year.I guess I had fun.

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  1. Wow Raedence i like your descriptive writing but maybe next time you can write a bit more.

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