Des hunt work shop

By Anonymous -
So as kauri team may know Des hunt came to visit us.5 people got chosen to be in a work shop with him.One of them out of my class was me,it was really cool.We writ a back story about our self (a back story is a little story about your self like in a story sometimes there is a little story about the mane character.)This is my one:My name is Raedence I was born in hamilton I went to peach grove kindy garden when i was 4.Writing and reading are my favourite  subjects.When I was 1 2 and 3 i lived with my nan and poppy as well as my big brother and dad.Now i live with my dad step mum baby brother and step sister.That was my back story.We learnt what a hook is in a story its when you get so in to a story.Also we learnt ingredients to a story:Descriptions of things,descriptions of events and dialogue.He also taught us some chemistry like when he made colours change,first it was water then it was orange then blue then black.                                                                                            This is des hunt and his pet dog named poku.

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