Raedence @ Hamilton East School

Slither slide he left a lot of goo  and a slimy sparkly path. He's a naughty little thing with a 100 and something  leg's he. Hi's parents have always told him "son never go in the monster puddle". But when he got in trouble  for kicking cars he was so mad he jumped right in the   MONSTER PUDDLE!!!!! He started to grow so big and didn't stop!! He tea the roof of room 9 and grabed a little girl he was runing around the big basket ball corts shouting hahahhanahahahahahahahhahahah. Then he took her down the srteet, fist he stoped for some icecrem. Then the army butterfly called the humen army to come to the rescue,the 7 army men were shooting the caterpillar, then he fell on the ground and we gave him a shrenking poshin and he turnd back in to normel size. Then the principle (pippa) cleand up the monster poshin and he went back to his house and then he got grounded (of course.) i was literacy by thinking what to write.

Wind, Clouds, Rain - Weather! Raedence and H.j saw lightning outside their house along time ago.Weather can be every were. Wind can move softly and wind can move strongly.Thin clouds sometimes can mean the weather might change.The dark grey clouds mean that the rain is ready to come out of the clouds .Rainbows are made when rain and sunshine combine. My report tells about something new, important, unusual or interesting. ✔ My piece has a headline. ✔ My headline gets the readers attention and tells about the main idea of the newstory. ✔ The introduction comes next. It is short and tells who, when, what where. ✔ The rest of my writing tells more facts. ✔ I told about the news happening to someone else.- I have not used “ I ” ✔ I have not wasted words. ✔ I have underlined and corrected my spelling. ✔ All my sentences start with a capital letter and end with a full stop. ✔ I used the toolkit because i am