Raedence @ Hamilton East School

My heart was racing as we lined up.In my head were a lot of voices in my head,some were saying "go go" when others were saying "no no".321 bang!We'r going,as people all most trip up so do i phew saved it.People were shouting,puffing "ahhh" i'm never gonna make it!Whats that smell "eww" its mud stench. Some thing just flew in to my mouth!My third lap all most done. (puffing)Hey i' m done! (ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh)   Reflection:I tried my best and I did better than last year.I guess I had fun.

             Interland is a land of internet stuff.Here is there logo man:       Interland is a great way to be cyber smart.You can chose options of what you think is the right answer to what there saying.I love interland because its a great way to know what to do and what not to do on the internet.I hope you try it out one day.Being safe on the  internet is what it's teaching you.

So as kauri team may know Des hunt came to visit us.5 people got chosen to be in a work shop with him.One of them out of my class was me,it was really cool.We writ a back story about our self (a back story is a little story about your self like in a story sometimes there is a little story about the mane character.)This is my one: My name is Raedence I was born in hamilton I went to peach grove kindy garden when i was 4.Writing and reading are my favourite  subjects.When I was 1 2 and 3 i lived with my nan and poppy as well as my big brother and dad.Now i live with my dad step mum baby brother and step sister. That was my back story.We learnt what a hook is in a story its when you get so in to a story.Also we learnt ingredients to a story:Descriptions of things,descriptions of events and dialogue.He also taught us some chemistry like when he made colours change,first it was water then it was orange then blue then black.                                                                    

In my opinion I would want to wake up 11 years old. Here are 4 reasons, #1 Then i wouldn't have to wait 1 more year to go to peach grove  intermediate. #2 And if i wanted to go see my step sister if i'm at my Nan's i could. #3 I could hag out with my friends at there house or some were else.(like my big brother.) #4 And i could go to school with my big brother. In conclusion,I would want to be 11 when i wake up.(Really badly!!!)

#1 cross country Run,run,run cross country I need to try my best. Huffing and puffing cross country is all most here. #2 Running Run,run here come running running is not fun. #3 Socks Socks are nice and warm. There all ways here when I need them.socks socks socks.